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my very first drawing of Milo. By this time, I didnt know what I wanted him to be, i was thinking. "superhero" but.... nah.

so, i saw that i had a power symbol on his eye 8D
that. He. could. B mah. XBOX!!360!!
weee

so here he is.
im not sure of colors. sooooo.
8D

if you critique. dont comment on the style D| more like, other things yo <3

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:iconshamoosh:
Okidokie lets get this party started .___.

Baww anyway, critic...yeh


Ok first things first he's super awesome and I think I want his babys. You always have mega origanal ideas becuse your brains awesome like that but this guy if pretty darn epic. Humanized machine people have been done befor for all of the game consels but your guy seems more uniqe then them seeing as he doesen't blatantly look like he was made to a resemble an X box o3o His outfit it also very spiffeh |D especily the scarf. NOW ON TO THE NASTY PARTS >D


i lie ;3;

I wont be mean

Anatomy wise he looks kinda...off. not everything mind that, just his neck and his arms (which I know I cant say anything about but fff we're talking about YOU so yeh ^^; ) His neck seems kinda to skinny to hold his head up and in comparison to his shoulders the curve is to.......little? I don't know. But it just looks kinda weird to me. While everything else face wise looks perfect his mouth seems a little off centerd. I know you were going for a jaunty smile (or whatever the hell you'd call it XD) but it doesen't seem to match with the rest of it, also his adems apple is a little asque .__. But his nose is fucking sexy
-wants-
It may just be becuse you left off the hands but the arms seem at at odd angle but the more I look the more I think i'm wrong so maybe they arnt but still, it looks very uncomfortable whatever he's doing.

As i've all ready said the outfit is frigging awesome but to make it ';pop' more shading would do the trick |3 but seeing as i've seen your shadign and I know how wonderfull it is i guess this isen't really somthing to 'improve' persay, just add.

Overall he's super aweosme and you better draw him more becuase he's so frigging coolio XD and I'd love to see him coloured o3o there are just the few tiny things I mentioned which coudl be improved but w/e :3
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:iconcasualcasualty:
I'd just LOVE to see the "red ring of death" on those goggles... XD

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:iconkasiasdragon:
I'd like to point out that as a pencil drawing, you used some very good texturing for the darker spots, and I can appriciate that. It is an unfinished work though, by your own words, so I'll just comment on some color schemes that I think would be interesting to see.

(By the way, I love the goggles. With they sold them somewhere, they'd be awesome for the techie geek. You might try pitching them to [link] They're an awesome sight that offers money for your ideas. :3)

As I was saying, on the color scheme. The hat itself rather reminds me of Christmas (probably because of the slight design and the fluff on top,) so I'd use some red in there. It kind of looks like a candy cane with the stripes, so that would work out nicely. I'd also put in some neon green though: Not just for a contrast, but also going on the techie portion of this piece.

Keeping in mind that you've gone with something of an X-Box theme here, it'd have duel meaning: That he's definately illuminated, but also "The red ring of death" that seems to plague most of the 360s I've ever dealt with. It'd be an interesting concept in my opinion of what you could do to push the superhero/not superhero portion of the picture.

As for his clothes themselves, I'd probably leave the shirt white, or perhaps black (depending on which 360 color you have XD) and put his scarf in the opposing color (for the trim of the XBox.) The frills I would personally make the bright green, and the boxes I would make the red, to correlate with the hat. So on and so forth, essentially the peice would be a complimentary color scheme by the time I was done with it. XD

Of course, these are just my opinions, and feel free to tweak or toss at your liezure. I hope, however, that my ideas give you some awesome ideas of your own!

I can't wait to see the finished project.

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Ohmfguh blah blah my cousin makes badass scarves that inspires me to make your scarf really legit fo sho homeskillet, yo. Oh, hope I didn't wake you 0.0 shhh Kasiaphone, make no noise - ~THCA
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I love the power symbol.

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:iconizzywinkle:
8D that has got to be one of the best comments ive eeeevvveeer gotten. 8']

thankyou for the color ideas 8D ill write them down when i get home ;u;

and to tell you the truth, when i first drew Milo, the 'red ring of death' was just the power button. but the fact that I shaded it in, probably makes techies belive it is. xD lol

i love milo, and i love the color ideas (again) Thankyou!!! x3

ill finish it asap

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:iconizzywinkle:
right x3
ah. like i told kasaisdragon, it was originally not the red ring of death, but just the power button x3

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:iconizzywinkle:
x3 thankyou.

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:iconcasualcasualty:
Oh, so it IS the red ring of death?? Dangit, I thought it WAS just the power button!

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:iconizzywinkle:
it was, just a power button,but i think its a cool idea, even if my xbox360 is still amazing and works greatly.

it would suck if i jinxed it ... << >>

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